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Two new image WIP's please crit
show user profile  Bobbyboy
I've been working a lot with mental ray lighting lately trying to improve my knowledge

The first image here is a simple room arch viz attempt, models are all evermotion, and lighting is done with 1 mentalray area light 1 mentalray spotlight and a mr sky portal


I'd really like to start working more with arch viz over the next six months


This image is actually something i started 4 or so years ago as a photo modeling attempt, last night was going through old projects and decided to do something with it, this is what i've come up with so far, will redo the grass and would like suggestions on anything else you think should be done (still planning on adding lots of little details)



Cheers guys, love to hear your C&C


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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1/31/2009 8:07:56 PM (last edit: 1/31/2009 8:07:56 PM)
show user profile  hanksr00tbeer
I'm not feeling that twisty mattress. How would a person sit on that?
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1/31/2009 9:34:09 PM (last edit: 1/31/2009 9:34:09 PM)
show user profile  Stephen R.
its meant to be a lounge chair mixed with a day bed kinda thing I think, I think its cool.





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1/31/2009 9:47:40 PM (last edit: 1/31/2009 9:47:40 PM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
here is an update on the second one though i'm not really happy with it, i don't know where i want to take it atm.

The grass and ivy dont look right inside a shed that is obviously being used because there is a lit lantern..... anyway



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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1/31/2009 11:47:12 PM (last edit: 1/31/2009 11:47:12 PM)
show user profile  Error404
the image outside the window of the first render... needs to be much brighter, almost white! :-)

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2/1/2009 12:01:08 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 12:01:08 AM)
show user profile  Phalse
wouldnt the ivy be "outside" the shed. I thought the ivy looks good.

I thought it was a lantern on the outside of the shed, the ivy is outside too.
The bright light is coming from the inside of the shed like something strange is happening in there.


I guess reversing the view and you are looking at the inside of the shed make sense only because the base concrete along the floor suggests your on the inside and the sun is coming up outside.
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2/1/2009 1:44:36 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 1:46:07 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
the door is modeled from a photo so there is no outside side to it unfortunatelty, so without redoing my textures it has to be from inside

new render in the works


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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2/1/2009 1:59:57 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 1:59:57 AM)
show user profile  mrgrotey
The ivy if far to chunky, thats the only problem I have with it, make the 'branches' thinner, they're about 3-4 times too thick




also the whole image is blurred, make the lamp the focus of the image.

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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2178/2511530969_4c41cdf7ea.jpg?v=0





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2/1/2009 2:15:41 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 2:19:21 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
will work on the ivy grotes thanks

here is a new render



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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2/1/2009 4:43:47 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 4:43:47 AM)
show user profile  Dave
Isn't that the same floor texture in bolts' new evo scene?

"I flew over Egypt once"

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2/1/2009 8:30:54 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 8:30:54 AM)
show user profile  Davious
i really like the arch vis one, the other lacks focus. I look at the lamp then am distracted by the beams. Nice image but it should have a purpose. as said the outside image should be brighter in the arch vis.

" Difficult, yes. Impossible , no..."
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2/1/2009 10:09:20 AM (last edit: 2/1/2009 10:09:20 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
I'm trying to think of where i can take the door image, though i'm not sure yet, i like this as the final camera angle, but dont know what else i can add as a focus yet

anyway, here is a photoshop edited version of the arch viz, I'm going to try and make the lighting more like this mock up and brighten the outside image


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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2/1/2009 5:47:46 PM (last edit: 2/1/2009 5:47:46 PM)
show user profile  Duders
Had a thought for the door image, Bung in some flys/bugs flying around the lantern, done right I think it could give the image a nice focal point.
willdudley.co.uk

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2/1/2009 5:51:09 PM (last edit: 2/1/2009 5:51:09 PM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
Here is an update on the arch scene

I was planning this to be the final render (rendered it pretty high quality)
but am really not feeling the speakers, might get rid of the completely also some more texture on the couches could work better



anyway, gotsta go *eyes 1.75L bottle of jimmy*
Cheers


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/bob9909/xmassig.jpg


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2/6/2009 6:56:36 AM (last edit: 2/6/2009 6:56:36 AM)
show user profile  Phalse
i would pay 15 Doolers an hour for you to render a car on that cracked dirt floor, i want you to render it for 49 hours, thanks

bye

Oh if you are adding more textures, the wall looks really smooth to me. Like its not even painted drywall, more like painted rubber wall.

From the first render to the last, much improved.
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2/6/2009 8:31:55 AM (last edit: 2/6/2009 8:42:15 AM)
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