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show user profile  Bobbyboy
Started this the other night, based on an architectural design by tadao ando

still working on the lighting and materiel

all c&c appreciated


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2/3/2009 9:58:56 PM (last edit: 2/3/2009 9:58:56 PM)
show user profile  Stephen R.
other than the fact that the concrete is way to shiney, I think it looks really good.

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2/3/2009 10:06:43 PM (last edit: 2/3/2009 10:06:43 PM)
show user profile  Cylon

Looks real nice.
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2/3/2009 10:39:58 PM (last edit: 2/3/2009 10:39:58 PM)
show user profile  markoid
Interesting. good composition, which I often like about your stuff..... I like it.
The floor and steps look wet.
Back into the 3D with some gusto mate... good to see!

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2/4/2009 3:37:41 AM (last edit: 2/4/2009 3:37:41 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
Thanks guys, I love the composition and design, unfortunately i cant take credit for either, the camera angle and placement is based on the reference picture i found for this building

going to try and work on the concrete a bit more :)

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2/4/2009 6:48:55 AM (last edit: 2/4/2009 6:48:55 AM)
show user profile  Mashedpot8er
Nice choice of building mate. Its a cracker. I'm on the too shiny concrete wagon too. Other than that........perfect.

Cad Monkey

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2/4/2009 7:44:02 AM (last edit: 2/4/2009 7:44:02 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
Here is a high quality render with reworked textures and lens flair! :D

I think the ground might still be a bit too shiny, if so i might fix it in photoshop till i can think of what else to do with this scene (just sat and waited 3 hours for the render to come through! :S)

Hope you guys like it (I switched to a 16bit workflow too to avoid the banding i was getting with the heavy post editing)

Here is a version much closer to the high contrast photo i used as a reference


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2/4/2009 9:59:27 AM (last edit: 2/4/2009 10:10:35 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
bump....... anyone got any thoughts on this?

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2/4/2009 9:37:28 PM (last edit: 2/4/2009 9:37:28 PM)
show user profile  donvella
I really really liked it until i seen the reference lol - i dont mean that to be rude.

Your reference has alot of contrast which it seems your lacking in your final render. I love the camera angle, modelling, maybe the reflections are a little too bright, you can see some sort of vignetting around the light sources in the reference.

IMO its a great shot to pick and learn from, go for gold mate.

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2/5/2009 5:11:15 AM (last edit: 2/5/2009 5:11:15 AM)
show user profile  horizon
He never posted the reference image...

Sooo... you don't think walls are too reflective bobby?

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2/5/2009 5:16:58 AM (last edit: 2/5/2009 5:16:58 AM)
show user profile  Bobbyboy
sorry for the confusion, here is the reference picture

@horizon......... *little voice* maybe....... =P

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2/5/2009 6:42:25 AM (last edit: 2/5/2009 6:42:25 AM)
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