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Sunny morning
show user profile  hizan
Trying to capture the atmosphere of a sunny morning in a kitchen...

 photo ketelnieuw04_zps7rnm5ib7.jpg
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5/17/2015 8:38:25 PM (last edit: 5/17/2015 8:38:25 PM)
show user profile  ScotlandDave
Looks pretty decent but i think you need stronger lighting compositionally, as it is quite diffuse atm.. The sugar cubes are quite blown-out also..

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5/17/2015 9:49:25 PM (last edit: 5/17/2015 9:49:25 PM)
show user profile  Bolteon
"Trying to capture the atmosphere of a sunny morning in a kitchen..."

So where is it? The atmosphere... ;-)

Also, way too clean.

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5/17/2015 11:36:30 PM (last edit: 5/17/2015 11:36:30 PM)
show user profile  STRAT
dont mind the cleaness, but give it some mood!


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5/18/2015 9:49:43 AM (last edit: 5/18/2015 9:49:43 AM)
show user profile  hizan
Thanks for your comments!

I will rerender the image with different lighting.
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5/18/2015 12:20:15 PM (last edit: 5/18/2015 12:20:15 PM)
show user profile  chillywilson
try some volume lighting with slight dust particles in the air.
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5/18/2015 1:36:03 PM (last edit: 5/18/2015 1:36:03 PM)
show user profile  hizan
This is the image with better lighting, some material changes and vignetting...

 photo ketelnieuw06_zpsz6pljyoe.jpg

next update Iwill throw in some volume light.
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5/24/2015 9:38:07 PM (last edit: 5/24/2015 9:38:07 PM)
show user profile  luxxeon
I like the first version better than the second. I don't think the vignetting is adding anything to the image.

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5/25/2015 2:56:07 AM (last edit: 5/25/2015 2:56:07 AM)
show user profile  chillywilson
I like the warmth you put into the the light for the second one.
I think instead of vignette maybe make a shadow map like a shadow of trees from the outside poking in.

I see the bubbles in the second jar, I think some more of them and different sizes in both jars will be a nice touch.

Your sugar cubes have to much bump to them.

Your textures are great and fantastic maybe some variation on the flower so they don't look like 3 copies of each other.

The flooring texture of the table or counter is strange, maybe rethink that.

All in all I think with a little spit and polish this will be an amazing still life.
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5/25/2015 4:17:55 AM (last edit: 5/25/2015 4:18:43 AM)
show user profile  sheheryar_noor

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5/25/2015 4:13:44 PM (last edit: 5/25/2015 4:13:44 PM)
show user profile  Sir_Manfred
Looking good!

I'd like to see some water stains, fat and oils from touching and grabbing, and steam from the teapot :) (Unless it's supposed to be cold tea)

Right now the teapot looks brand new, nobody ever touched it with bare hands, no drop of water was spilled on it when filling it up.

Still great looking render.

I googled some references to show you what I mean

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Fat and oils + steam:

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5/25/2015 11:01:17 PM (last edit: 5/25/2015 11:01:35 PM)
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