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Sitting room interior
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Hi guys and gals,

I'm working on another interior as one of my current projects.

I'm pretty much done with modeling i think now, however really keen for some comments and crits please.

Need that MF nudge to take the render up a level.

Thanks


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6/3/2011 4:18:59 PM (last edit: 6/3/2011 4:18:59 PM)
show user profile  Chris123643
i like whats on the TV the most.

Cant really offer many crits, couldn't do any better myself. (ill try though)

1. right wall seems abit blotchy and light where it shouldnt be at the bottom above the skirting (no geometry bashing though geometry is there? ive told you about that before ;)
2. cant workout the grey bit at the top of the curtain
3. overall lighting doesnt inspire. (bit harsh, maybe some pros can help me out)


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6/3/2011 4:22:18 PM (last edit: 6/3/2011 4:41:18 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
haha, that was the starting point, then the room got built around it ;-)


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6/3/2011 4:22:57 PM (last edit: 6/3/2011 4:22:57 PM)
show user profile  mike_renouf
Lovely modelling and materials. Only crit would be that the lighting scheme is a bit plain. A posh living room could do with some stylish spotlights and a chandelier or something? That might take it to the next level.

Brilliant so far though!




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6/3/2011 4:50:40 PM (last edit: 6/3/2011 4:50:40 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
cheers mate, yea i toyed with putting a chandelier in, but coz of the camera angle you hardly saw any of it. Maybe i'll have another a go


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6/3/2011 4:53:50 PM (last edit: 6/3/2011 4:53:50 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
a few minor tweaks... about 30 mins work over lunch + render time.

Still trying to figure out how to get some ceiling lights in.

Any further crits would be much appreciated


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6/6/2011 4:18:50 PM (last edit: 6/6/2011 4:18:50 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
*shameful bump*

any crits guys? :-)


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6/7/2011 4:12:09 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 4:12:09 PM)
show user profile  Coxy
Change it to a picture of Ramsey scoring against United and it will be perfect. :)

It looks like you have a little blotching on that white wall from the lighting.



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6/7/2011 4:17:58 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 4:18:55 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
haha good one coxy :-p


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6/7/2011 4:21:10 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 4:21:10 PM)
show user profile  Nik Clark
Random thoughts. It's a nice image, but:

If those are DVD's, they look far too tall.
The lighting in the corner looks a little odd on the ceiling.
What's the yellow box under the TV for?
He's never going to score that goal, not at that angle. He's probably vastly overpaid too.




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6/7/2011 4:21:24 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 4:21:24 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
cheers Nik. Will address those issues for final render.

Yellow box will be black, its like a shelf thing, but with nothing on it yet.




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6/7/2011 4:39:47 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 4:40:27 PM)
show user profile  un84
hii...just checked it in afternoon but cudnt reply...:-)very nice going...maybe u could show some more ceiling and add some lights there

@ coxy - yeaaa m an arsenal fan too;-)


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6/7/2011 6:12:20 PM (last edit: 6/7/2011 6:12:20 PM)
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