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show user profile  wrcwrx
i know its too perfect, but any other thoughts?
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6/23/2010 9:06:27 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 9:06:27 PM)
show user profile  parkerfamily
match the metal eraser... binding to the wood better, it looks like it should fall off. also, your lead is too doark. and eraser seems off somehow, but i don't really know how.
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6/23/2010 9:43:14 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 9:43:14 PM)
show user profile  mrgrotey
Not much to comment on mate, and I don't mean it's perfect, I mean ...it's just a pencil :/




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6/23/2010 9:53:54 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 9:53:54 PM)
show user profile  DannyMax
how about the makers name printed on the side




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6/23/2010 10:24:15 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 10:24:15 PM)
show user profile  Erm Kahoff
The name is sometimes stamped in which could add a little interest.

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6/23/2010 10:27:19 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 10:27:19 PM)
show user profile  StevegeK
And the actual point (the black part) is really small. The diameter is usually wider/thicker...



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6/23/2010 10:31:16 PM (last edit: 6/23/2010 10:31:16 PM)
show user profile  Westcoast13
Looks too white/bright too.

Have a look at dd's website, he's done some pen models that are good.


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6/24/2010 9:53:55 AM (last edit: 6/24/2010 9:53:55 AM)
show user profile  STRAT
too much radiosity





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6/24/2010 10:00:56 AM (last edit: 6/24/2010 10:00:56 AM)
show user profile  BattleMetalChris
Where the tip meets the wood is too straight. If you look at a real pencil, they never *quite* get the lead absolutely central inside the wiood, the result being that the lead/wood boundary section is at an angle. If that makes sense :-P

I do like the surface of the metal on the end.
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6/30/2010 9:32:37 PM (last edit: 6/30/2010 9:33:10 PM)
show user profile  Coxy
I would try to make the rubber look a bit worn. This might seem a bit weird but every pencil i ever owned had bite marks in it >.> maybe put in a few indentations. The lead looks too flat, like it needs some specular.

Some rubber/wood shavings on the ground?



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6/30/2010 9:44:28 PM (last edit: 6/30/2010 9:44:28 PM)
show user profile  Davious
as a render is is good quality, be nice to see it on a table or desk, the white background is a bit much, and defo a makers stamp on the side, be good practice for the unwrap and a bump. Like the mats, maybe a bit of reflect on it, but you need an environment.

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6/30/2010 10:09:40 PM (last edit: 6/30/2010 10:09:40 PM)
show user profile  Dub.
"too much radiosity "

What does that even mean?

Radiosity is not something you dial up and down.


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7/1/2010 1:25:07 AM (last edit: 7/1/2010 1:25:07 AM)
show user profile  soontekk
he meant too much color bleeding in the gi department

i see a list of things that could be improved, most of which are also mentioned above
add caran dache as letters
and make a bunch laying around for interest
break the point ! :)

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7/1/2010 2:16:42 AM (last edit: 7/1/2010 2:16:42 AM)
show user profile  md ntth
the wood and rubber apear plastic material but the steel is good

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7/5/2010 1:49:55 AM (last edit: 7/6/2010 6:02:20 PM)
show user profile  horizon
Why is stealing good?


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7/5/2010 1:57:56 AM (last edit: 7/5/2010 1:57:56 AM)
 
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