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Mall Evening View
show user profile  vishesh
Hi Fellows.....

I have just finished working on a Mall project.

Here is the image --->


Its been a painful task to do this project on my old quad core system. i think time has come now that i ask for i7 system from my super rich boss :P

suggestions, critics are welcome.....

Regards,
Vishesh

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/14/2011 10:44:52 AM (last edit: 2/14/2011 10:44:52 AM)
show user profile  roccodiablo
Looks nice for a presentation but a few things I noticed are:

The guy in front of the Honda garage looks like he's getting ready to be sick into the water

The car is not following the line of the road

Some camera correction I think is needed to straighten up the far left wall (straighten up all of it, but the far left wall is the most noticeable)

There's some dodgy mapping at the corner of the left hand side wagon wheel facia. It looks a bit messy how the wagon wheels cut off into the wall.

cheers



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2/14/2011 11:07:11 AM (last edit: 2/14/2011 11:07:11 AM)
show user profile  vishesh
>>The guy in front of the Honda garage look......... lol . we are having very limited 3d people collection. so i was using just everything that we have. will change it.

>>>The car is not following the line of the road.... car is placed correctly... it may be bcoz of camera angle i guess.

>>>Some camera correction I think ...... actually we are looking for some dramatic effect. so thats why i haven't used any camera correction on this.

>>>There's some dodgy mapping at the corner of the left.......oops !! will correct that.... will unwrap it.

Thanks for the suggestions :)

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/15/2011 5:41:42 AM (last edit: 2/15/2011 5:41:42 AM)
show user profile  STRAT
first initial impression - very nice, immediately grabs your attention and sells the development. but you do need to finesse it a fair bit more to make it a lot technically better and naturally more pleasing to look at.

* camera definitely needs straightening. i know you said you wanted a more dynamic shot, but even so, this isn't the way. the design and proportions of the building speak for themselves. the straights really should be straight.

* peeps - just spend a further 10 mins or so looking at what they're doing, where they are, how many are clumped together, what direction they're walking at etc etc etc. if you add a load of people they must look natural and realistically positioned. Also, with some of them, their lighting and contrasts dont match the scene.

* car - not needed at all, neither are the lighting streaks.





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2/15/2011 8:51:33 AM (last edit: 2/15/2011 8:51:33 AM)
show user profile  Pil
The aspect ratio of the poster girl looks strange (thats the girl above the sick man).


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2/15/2011 9:19:05 AM (last edit: 2/15/2011 9:19:05 AM)
show user profile  vishesh
>>> camera definitely needs straightening..... ok, will gonna apply camera corrections than.

>>>peeps ......... yeah i agree with that. i will spend some time positioning the people and may be adding more people.... i want to make it look more lively....

>>>car - not needed at all, neither are the lighting streaks. ................ if i remove these, don't u think the area will look empty.... what if i put just subtle lighting streaks only....

>>>The aspect ratio of the poster girl looks strange......oops !!! yeah i think u r probably right.....will cross check that.

Thanks Strat and Pil for the suggestions............ its time to work on these comments now... will show u guys an update soon.
c ya !!!

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/16/2011 5:55:08 AM (last edit: 2/16/2011 5:55:08 AM)
show user profile  vishesh
Hey guys i have updated the image.... I have done most of the changes as mentioned here...
I have worked on the people too.




Strat...... i am still keeping the lights trail for now.... i think otherwise the area may look blank or dull...

c ya !!!

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/17/2011 10:56:40 AM (last edit: 2/17/2011 10:58:51 AM)
show user profile  parkerfamily
add some borders to all those pictures on it, i assume they're posters and that's why they don't have frames or anything, but if so add some sort of indicator of that, don't just leave them as images.

Also, why are there wagon wheels on the walls of the building?

I'm all for interesting designs on buildings, but the way those circles are in columns makes them look extremely "fake".
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2/18/2011 6:11:40 AM (last edit: 2/18/2011 6:11:40 AM)
show user profile  albongino
Yeah, removing the wagon wheels texture from the wall can improve your image a lot..
................



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2/18/2011 6:21:25 AM (last edit: 2/18/2011 6:21:25 AM)
show user profile  Mashedpot8er
Its getting there now. I'd maybe look at the reflection on the glass now. Could add that extra bit of realism that really sells it.




Cad Monkey


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2/18/2011 7:55:32 PM (last edit: 2/18/2011 7:55:32 PM)
show user profile  vishesh
>>>add some borders to all those pictures on it......... these are back lit signages. regarding the border, i am going to check the signage detail with the architect i am working with. will have a look at this....

>>>why are there wagon wheels on the walls of the building......... This wheel has cultural values attached to it. It is widely used in the city of "Bhubaneshwar". It is chosen by the client as he wants this mall to have cultural feel of the city.

So i can't remove this unfortunately.
all i can do is either try the Normal mapping or displace thing to make it look 3d........wil try that...

>>>>Yeah, removing the wagon wheels texture from the wall can improve your image a lot.........
client is the god :)
I can only enhance the effect... will work on this...

>>>I'd maybe look at the reflection on the glass now............should i increase the reflection of the glass.... will that help....???
i have already placed dummy buildings around my scene to reflect....

Thanks for the suggestions guys. It helps alot.
will gonna work on that.....will update this in few days....

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/19/2011 6:19:34 AM (last edit: 2/19/2011 6:19:34 AM)
show user profile  Mashedpot8er
Hi Vivesh. I had a quick play in photoshop for you, this is what I came up with. :)






Cad Monkey


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2/20/2011 1:24:28 AM (last edit: 2/20/2011 3:32:18 AM)
show user profile  vishesh
Hey Mashedpot8er............. nice attempt man :)
I think it has more artistic feel.

But i am not sure if builders like to sell their product like this way....

"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/21/2011 6:12:41 AM (last edit: 2/21/2011 6:12:41 AM)
show user profile  inxa
Hey Vishessssssh ! How have you been man. Long time...Good to see you post.
Completely missed this one.

You should look into the last one edited by Mashed, looks fantastic.

lol but I agree the mindset in India is completely different so we can't really have sober images.
As we say builders need everything "ekdum jhagari magari" in slang Hindi. It means they need everything shinny, bright, filled with lights..etc. :P


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2/22/2011 5:19:28 AM (last edit: 2/22/2011 5:19:28 AM)
show user profile  vishesh
Hey Mashedpot8er........ I have shown ur ps work to my fellow architects. they liked it too. i am gonna show it to my boss and see how he is gonna reacts......
if he likes it we may send this version to clients too as well.... lets see...
Great attempt !!!! thanks :)

Hey inxa ..........
i am good buddy. after a long time i did a post here.......hoping to do this more often now....
Lol @ ekdum jhagari magari.......:))

yeah i also think what Mashedpot8er did looks nice..... lets see what my boss says....??

cheers fellows !!!


"Passion is the flame that burns forever."
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2/23/2011 8:01:01 AM (last edit: 2/23/2011 8:01:01 AM)
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