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Kitchen interior
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Hi guys,

Got a little down time, whilst I'm waiting for freelance bits to come in. So thought I'd keep at the vray learning.

feel like I'm starting to get to grips with vray now. Any C&C very much appreciated...


3D Portfolio

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8/7/2012 3:19:29 PM (last edit: 8/7/2012 3:19:29 PM)
show user profile  khamski
Nice work!
I like everything except that knife holder and pans above.
They look a bit flat.

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8/7/2012 3:37:49 PM (last edit: 8/7/2012 3:37:49 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
Yeah, I think this is my favourite render of yours. Very realistic.
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8/7/2012 3:55:49 PM (last edit: 8/7/2012 3:55:49 PM)
show user profile  GirishDJoshi
Now that's nicee... lol my comment again... don't cut the prep island .. let the camera see a little floor.

3D ArchVis


Girish Joshi Photography

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8/7/2012 6:35:51 PM (last edit: 8/7/2012 6:35:51 PM)
show user profile  STRAT
yeah, lovely start. keep going. a few pointers -

* As Girish say, lower the camera. less ceiling more floor, but, maintain straight verticals.

* the brick mapping needs correcting, and needs much much less bump.

* dont go mad on external views

* replace that 'rag' with a decent hand/dish towel :P

looking like an awesome start tho mate


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8/7/2012 6:42:01 PM (last edit: 8/7/2012 6:42:25 PM)
show user profile  kumar
I like every thing


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8/8/2012 7:58:01 AM (last edit: 8/8/2012 7:58:01 AM)
show user profile  donvella
Hey, nice start! Love the timber on the benches, and the finish looks good. What was said above about the brick texture (especially on the edge where the bricks dont tile around the corner correctly). Please rob, please, get rid of that noise! It always lets down your beautiful lighting, its like losing all the definition in that beautiful wood. Can we see the rest of that fridge when you pull the camera down, or even a more front on angle. In archviz the camera angles IMO are always quite parallel, as my old architect boss used to say, "wheres that camera correction?"

Nice so far.

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8/8/2012 8:12:31 AM (last edit: 8/8/2012 8:12:31 AM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Hi guys.

Thanks so much for the comments. Been working on this a bit more today. Am home sick though, so not able to use work machine... So still low res and noisy as my machine is shit:-(

Taken on board your comments and tweaked a few things. Still lots of props to add, plants and kitchen stuff, books on shelves ect...

Been playing around with some Post work, what do you guys think? and which of the 3 do you prefer?





3D Portfolio

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8/8/2012 11:39:47 PM (last edit: 8/8/2012 11:39:47 PM)
show user profile  Garp
It looks great, Rob.
I vote for the one in the middle. It has a 70s look that I like. But it's just personal taste.

I'm wondering what kind of material the evacuation thingy is made of (I don't know what it's called). It looks transluscent and/or slightly self-illuminated. My eyes keep coming back to it.

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8/9/2012 12:30:21 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 12:30:21 AM)
show user profile  BishBashRoss
Here are some things I would change.

Pan hanging rack - Lose the spindly decorative bits on top, doesn't go with the units.
Tea Towel - change the material, less is more. Simple pattern probably one neutral colour.
Clock - Way too old fashioned, replace with something simple an modern.
Microwave - Not a fan of it, kind of ugly things would try to hide away somewhere or remove.
The blue thing Garp mentions - Maybe desaturate, kind of distracting right now.

Looks really good though, you are improving with every render.

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8/9/2012 12:46:36 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 12:46:36 AM)
show user profile  Garp
Er.. I meant the thing above it, connecting it to the ceiling.

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8/9/2012 1:33:11 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 1:33:11 AM)
show user profile  K-tonne
the thing that's above the hot plates (can you tell yet how much time i spend in the kitchen lol) with the blue bit on it looks to be self illuminated the higher it gets
the brickwork on the left looks to have grout on the outside corner- doesn't happen in real life- i think that and the fact there shouldn't be a partial brick showing where it meets the ceiling is what strat is getting at when he mentioned mapping
also just noticed the top couple of bricks are darker- like the ceiling is not touching the walls
get well soon :)

Website and Portfolio

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8/9/2012 1:45:35 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 1:45:35 AM)
show user profile  donvella
Im liking the second one as well, Ill post more later.

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8/9/2012 1:47:38 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 1:47:46 AM)
show user profile  GirishDJoshi
Nice dude. I really like the view.. fill the kitchen now. I don't like the light / over bright kitchen exhaust ..white look.

You need to get the bricks lined to the the wooden / brown feel in the last render.

You just need to take care of the ceiling sub-divs

3D ArchVis


Girish Joshi Photography

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8/9/2012 8:25:10 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 8:25:10 AM)
show user profile  Westcoast13
Yes, definitely the middle one for me mate!

My Turbosquid Area

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8/9/2012 8:45:24 AM (last edit: 8/9/2012 8:45:24 AM)
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