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I'll be more than happy to get your opinion on this...
show user profile  cnopicilin
This is the fourth bike I've made, just noticed that it's missing a windshield and the seat is overlapping the frame...


Click for bigger image.
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11/27/2011 7:37:10 PM (last edit: 11/27/2011 7:37:34 PM)
show user profile  Paunescudanutz
Reminds me a lot of my renders when I discovered how to make objects reflect.
Its good you post your work, but be ready to get some tough criticism from the guys and girls around here it will help you a lot.

I'm not an expert in something that is more advanced than a bicycle so i won't comment on concept or shapes but the materials need improving. The entire thing looks like made out of plastic, just making it reflect the gray plane on which its sitting on won't get you realism (I assume that's what you're after).
You will get even more help if you post wire frames, of the whole thing and certain parts of it so we can see the model as well.
Look into material tutorials, Mental Ray + Arch and Design materials are a must if you are after realism.

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<---~( Daniel )~--->


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11/27/2011 8:01:50 PM (last edit: 11/27/2011 8:01:50 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
Agree with Paunescudanutz. The tires were the first thing my eye jumped to. Give them some subtle noise (or just use arch and design rubber). But the model is nicely detailed.
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11/27/2011 11:26:27 PM (last edit: 11/27/2011 11:26:27 PM)
show user profile  cnopicilin
Thanks for your comments, I'll take a better look at the materials as soon as I can. As for the realism, I don't want to kill my computer with a realistic background. Maybe I could photoshop one though.
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11/28/2011 5:10:09 AM (last edit: 11/28/2011 5:10:09 AM)
show user profile  Paunescudanutz
the thing with the realistic reflections, they come from the environment, you don't have to model an actual environment around your model just to render it nicely, you can use HDRI's http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bF2_9wHvYXk


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11/28/2011 1:20:47 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 1:20:47 PM)
show user profile  Bolteon
those body panels in yellow could use some love. those are some odd subdivisions.

-Marko Mandaric



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11/28/2011 1:50:19 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 1:50:19 PM)
show user profile  cnopicilin
Odd subdivisons?

Also, I don't seem to able to get the HDRi to work, it's always too dark and no shine at all, even though I tried three tutorials and bluesummers' video as well :(
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11/28/2011 5:20:57 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 5:20:57 PM)
show user profile  Paunescudanutz
i think he meant these:

Edit: watch that tutorial carefully, make sure you don't miss any steps, and make sure to enable the Use Map in the Environment so that max uses the HDRI instead of the color.

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<---~( Daniel )~--->


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11/28/2011 5:24:16 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 5:29:00 PM)
show user profile  cnopicilin
I did everything by the tut, no dice.

Those "odd subdivisions" are intentionally made.
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11/28/2011 7:43:48 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 7:43:48 PM)
show user profile  Bolteon
really? cause they look like mistakes.


reference for comparison?

-Marko Mandaric



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11/28/2011 10:23:20 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 10:23:20 PM)
show user profile  Sylverstalker
That isn't meant to be this is it?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sLo-n9ccXGU

I only had a quick look but this is probably the closest motorcycle tutorial i found and there are some major differences in your model.

EDIT: Oops, I look like an idiot. Teach me for skim reading.....




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11/28/2011 11:35:43 PM (last edit: 11/28/2011 11:40:03 PM)
show user profile  cnopicilin
No, I did not use any reference for my model. It's 100% my own mind's creation.

EDIT: But I did use the front mask shape from my BMW model, modified it a bit tho.
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11/29/2011 6:45:05 AM (last edit: 11/29/2011 6:45:43 AM)
show user profile  Bolteon
still look like mistakes.



you should fix them.

-Marko Mandaric



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11/29/2011 8:24:38 AM (last edit: 11/29/2011 8:24:38 AM)
show user profile  cnopicilin
OKay, this is how it looks now, click for bigger image
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Some parts have isoline display on, ask for more renders.

I am redoing the front axle and brake caliber hold.

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11/29/2011 12:54:13 PM (last edit: 11/29/2011 12:54:41 PM)
show user profile  Bolteon
much better in the mesh, still a bit wobbly in the creases but going in the right direction.

-Marko Mandaric



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11/29/2011 1:19:38 PM (last edit: 11/29/2011 1:19:38 PM)
 
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