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Hip Hop is Dead [UE4] [56k Warning ;]
show user profile  jStins
Hey fellas,

So over the last year I've been learning UE4, mainly as it relates to asset creation, lighting, PBR shading, etc... Unlike my last UDK learning attempt, I decided to stay narrow in scope and focus on props. Here's the brief for the project:

A still image focusing on the clunky old hardware that was around during the rise of hip hop. The setting is a dusty old basement with late-day sunlight lighting the scene. Visual target is realism.

I'm getting close to calling this done, but have been looking at it too long and need some fresh eyes on it so I know what needs to be refined before I make portfolio shots and breakdowns.

So have at it MFers. What needs to be tweaked, adjusted, refined or added to call this piece done?

Thanks!


-Joel


joelstinson.com

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3/11/2016 8:26:24 AM (last edit: 3/11/2016 8:26:24 AM)
show user profile  spoon
Like it a lot!

Im no photography expert by far, but about the dof in the 2nd shot: if the dof is so strong up close, shouldnt the further away stuff like the LP player be also blurry?


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3/11/2016 8:52:44 AM (last edit: 3/11/2016 8:52:44 AM)
show user profile  ijzerman
Love it :)
Like the sl1200!
I think the dof is a bit strange in combination with the bloom in the second shot. Also, whats with the background? It looks whiteout and flat.
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3/11/2016 9:02:43 AM (last edit: 3/11/2016 9:02:43 AM)
show user profile  digs
looks fantastic
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3/11/2016 3:11:44 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 3:11:44 PM)
show user profile  Nik Clark
Awesome!


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3/11/2016 3:49:59 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 3:49:59 PM)
show user profile  joelr
i dont know why, but i think the scene needs some cigarettes, an ash tray, and some smoke to give it some more atmosphere



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3/11/2016 3:58:54 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 3:58:54 PM)
show user profile  9krausec
Super cool man! Like it.




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3/11/2016 4:46:25 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 4:46:25 PM)
show user profile  Dr. Jim
Where is Grandmaster Flash and the Furious Five?

Wutang hit in the 90's? So would boom boxes still be around? I know I had a CD player in 89.....

Oh, the image is fabulous! Love it.....really man.....I remember my BB so very well.....wish I still had it. Skanda 500 I think it was....
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3/11/2016 4:49:52 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 4:52:20 PM)
show user profile  jStins
Hey thanks everyone!

@Spoon: You're probably right. I'll look into it and the DOF probably needs to be toned down overall.

@ijzerman: I dropped the saturation on the posters so the props would stand out more, but I probably overdid it. Also need to drop the spec on those I think.

@joelr: That was on my list of stuff to add. Getting a bit burnt out on the realistic props, but I'll see if I can muster a little more energy to add those elements. I agree it would help the mood and history of the space.

@digs, Nik, 9krausec: Cheers! Thanks!

@Dr. Jim: You're probably right about the historical context of the albums / posters in the scene, but whatever because WUTANG.

-Joel


joelstinson.com

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3/11/2016 5:28:22 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 5:28:22 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
The only thing I would tweak is the atmosphere. Cigarette smoke / fog + coloured lighting would be brill.

As for your modelling and texturing... fucking sick, dude.
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3/11/2016 7:13:12 PM (last edit: 3/11/2016 7:13:12 PM)
show user profile  jStins
Thanks herfst!

Here are some of the final shots

More images and breakdowns:

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/QGgzr
http://www.joelstinson.com/Hip-Hop-is-Dead

Cheers!


-Joel


joelstinson.com

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3/20/2016 8:31:04 AM (last edit: 3/20/2016 8:31:04 AM)
show user profile  STRAT
Very awesome works mate.

Although, wouldnt bother giving a 56k warning sny more. Even I'm not that out of date.





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3/20/2016 10:31:52 AM (last edit: 3/20/2016 10:31:52 AM)
show user profile  Dave
Very sexy work,

3 things look a little off to me though.

The very shiny circular poster holder thingies (if that's what they are?), they're only really evident on the biggie smalls poster, but the top left appears to be getting clipped out.

And then you've got one in a seemingly random location over on the left.

Aside from that, the duplicated crates are very obvious due to the pen markings you've used, my guess is you're repeating those UV's around the entire crate, which is why you haven't just turned one around to hide the cloned markings. Not really a major issue at all, but it's something I noticed.

Again though, very nice work! Was cool to see it in the marmo viewer too.

"I flew over Egypt once"

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3/20/2016 4:04:40 PM (last edit: 3/20/2016 4:04:40 PM)
show user profile  gogodr
Looks really good, but really poly heavy for UE4.
how does it run?

Hello there

beautiful ;3


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3/20/2016 4:13:44 PM (last edit: 3/20/2016 4:13:44 PM)
show user profile  jStins
@Strat: Thanks! The 56k warning was just a shout out to the old days and to let people know there's images in here that break the resolution rules. :P

@Dave: Thanks for the kind words and good eye on some of those details. I may just let the thumb tack thing go, but if I'll see what's up with that if I get a lot of heat about it. You're spot on with the crates. I probably could have used stacked UVs on two sides instead of one.

@gogodr: Thanks. It runs smoothly (30-40fps) on my system and I don't have a great video card. 11k isn't that many polys for a hero asset. I agree that in the context of an actual game where these were background props, it would be overkill though.
-Joel


joelstinson.com

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3/20/2016 6:17:17 PM (last edit: 3/20/2016 6:17:17 PM)
 
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