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Forest valley scene
show user profile  uplate
Hi hope everything is going well

been working on this and could do with some crits not 100% happy but not sure whats up? moon definately needs looking at, but what else?



larger version here: http://www.divshare.com/download/10700084-839

cheers
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3/8/2010 9:26:17 PM (last edit: 3/8/2010 9:26:17 PM)
show user profile  Erm Kahoff
I like it.

Oh yeah, crits, hmmmm I cant see one badger, not one!

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If everyone around you is panicking and you are calm, perhaps you haven't fully grasped the situation


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3/9/2010 9:50:42 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 9:50:42 AM)
show user profile  spoon
Looks like there is plenty of detail there, too bd so much of it is hidden in the darkness. Maybe try a red-ish sunset?

Erm, its night, badgers also need sleep!


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3/9/2010 9:53:46 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 9:53:46 AM)
show user profile  Erm Kahoff
Maybe the moon egg scared them all away?

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If everyone around you is panicking and you are calm, perhaps you haven't fully grasped the situation


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3/9/2010 9:55:36 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 9:55:36 AM)
show user profile  mrgrotey
Well you learn something everyday, I never knew the moon was egg-shaped :p

[edit] dammit that was my joke!




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3/9/2010 9:55:54 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 9:56:11 AM)
show user profile  Westcoast13
Damn. I got Grotied. I was going to say about the moon.

edit. Jesus you lot are on the ball today.


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3/9/2010 9:56:35 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 9:57:11 AM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Really like this. I agree with Spoon however and would like to see a sunset one, to see all of the details in your landscape. Seems a shame to have them hiden in the dark.


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3/9/2010 10:20:36 AM (last edit: 3/9/2010 10:20:36 AM)
show user profile  uplate
cheers for the comments

little update:


larger version: http://www.divshare.com/download/10769514-ab9

next scene i do will be with a sunset but really want this to be a moonlit scene

I’ve added more ambient light so you can see stuff a little in the shadows

sorted out the moon it was the whole render that was wrong, got my pixel aspect messed up

anymore crits welcome but gonna put it in my gallery :-)

cheers again
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3/15/2010 1:38:41 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 1:38:41 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Really like this, great work!! Much better than the first render too. Out of interest how have you created scene? The terrain and the flaura?


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3/15/2010 1:56:31 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 1:56:31 PM)
show user profile  STRAT
the moon is too un-natural now. too hi-lighted.

(btw, i can see a badger)







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3/15/2010 2:04:11 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 2:04:11 PM)
show user profile  Joey Parker Jr.
Looks like a ground hog to me.
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3/15/2010 2:11:46 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 2:11:46 PM)
show user profile  npcph
really nice work. I would like to know what you used for the ground and the plants.

And BTW... that's a wild fronat, not a badger or a groundhog.

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3/15/2010 2:51:06 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 2:51:06 PM)
show user profile  uplate
Think ive sorted the moon now ?



larger version: http://www.divshare.com/download/10770806-136

terrain is a plane that i displaced modeled etc, normal maps, vertex paint, procedural mats. etc

plants etc are just pflow shape facing (x3 for each plant 1 for plant 1 for highlight 1 for shadow) with some other pflow jigery pockery....

thanks again
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3/15/2010 5:39:58 PM (last edit: 3/15/2010 5:39:58 PM)
show user profile  parkerfamily
....that's pflow?

incredible.....

and here i was getting annoyed at you for just using VUE presets and the landscape builder....
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3/16/2010 3:37:09 AM (last edit: 3/16/2010 3:37:09 AM)
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