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Blue Stash (short film)
show user profile  9krausec
Today at 4am the editing was all finished with the short I am making for a class.

Figured I'd post the final product!

This was the first short film I ever even attempted to produce and learned a lot about a few things. It was done in 3 days, because I am a procrastinating piece of sh#t.. :)

Blue Stash from Clayton Krause on Vimeo.

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12/13/2011 7:29:31 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 7:29:31 PM)
show user profile  beezy
Nice editing, good camera angles and lighting. Overall the directing was good but I personally didn't like the music which lasted the entire way, it added to the fact that this was a creepy short about sexual predators. Just wasn't appealing to me and it lacked creativity in the storyline.

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12/13/2011 8:18:25 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 8:18:48 PM)
show user profile  9krausec
Thanks for the crit Breezy!

Yeah, I guess I should of said it was a spin off of a tale known as Blue Beard to make it seem like I am less creepy.

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12/13/2011 8:27:09 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 8:27:09 PM)
show user profile  Dr. Jim
lol....that was pretty fun man!

Coulda taken it a bit further to really drive home the sexual predator concept,.......but alotta fun none the less.

LOL on the setting your mate on fire! hahaha
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12/13/2011 9:09:13 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 9:09:13 PM)
show user profile  Joey Parker Jr.
Well done! and creepy..
Only crit is the transitions going to black between each scene instead of just going from scene to scene.
But that's a style thing.
I laughed at the pile of candy in the back of the van.
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12/13/2011 9:30:45 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 9:30:45 PM)
show user profile  9krausec
Thank you for the kind words! We put a lot of effort into this video (in the 3 days we did it because we waited too close to our deadline)!

I met the 2 guys that were in my group through this, and we were talking about shooting a more indepth short film over the summer over the period of a few weeks..

Hopefully I can find a place for some CG visual FX in it! Need to get going on max again, just been SO busy!

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12/13/2011 9:36:42 PM (last edit: 12/13/2011 9:36:42 PM)
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