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Audi R8
show user profile  divertom
Hi all, just adding my 90% complete Audi R8 feedback would be greatful :)

Hope the below link works:
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2/7/2009 1:40:45 PM (last edit: 2/7/2009 1:42:13 PM)
show user profile  VKotek
the model looks alright, some weird spots here and there.

mainly tho, your materials need improving. the black is too black, needs more specular too, you should not have 100$ black areas like that
Vojtech Kotek

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2/7/2009 2:08:47 PM (last edit: 2/7/2009 2:08:47 PM)
show user profile  AntiCitizen
Interesting design
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2/8/2009 2:43:28 AM (last edit: 2/8/2009 2:43:28 AM)
show user profile  donvella
such a freakn awesome design! modelling is nice, can u show us some clay shots with wireframe.

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2/8/2009 3:05:11 AM (last edit: 2/8/2009 3:05:11 AM)
show user profile  Phalse
Nice job +98.2% better than I am, but whats up with the Dual engine slash Front break air intakes?

I "Don't" mean why was the car designed like that...... I mean why are they so covered in shadow, almost sucking in the shadows because of the black plastic +shadow.

and why does the black plastic look like black plastic instead of black carbon fiber weave, and I cant make out the texture of the metal grill behind the black intake area.

I'm looking directly inside the car, light defuses in there and IRL no way could I see the cars paint lit so well, but not see inside to the grill.

Oh and no one paints their car flat white anymore, your white is like bleeding and washing out. Only people who drive old 87 white hondas with the clear coat worn off all the way exposing bare paint because the car has never seen the inside of a garage...... they proceed to polish the paint anyway with an electric buffer then park the car under show room lights.
The white should have another semi-transparent layer thats lightly painted on below or above the white, try pearl, gold or perhaps some light pink or blue.

The ground is about equal quality to Boltoens Ground.

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2/8/2009 3:18:47 AM (last edit: 2/8/2009 3:50:21 AM)
show user profile  divertom
Ok cheers for the comments. i will certainly try to get the right results. As for the White car render i did that one as a request from a friend and thought would throw it in there :P For my first car I was still suprised that I managed to make the car in the first place :) my next project will be a Mustang Gt '69 cant wait.
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2/8/2009 4:00:15 PM (last edit: 2/8/2009 4:00:15 PM)
show user profile  Phalse
Oh my crit was really only 1 crit the "intakes"

But I was just trying to explain why it was looking off to me.
The car paint thing is hardly a problem.

Great work!

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2/8/2009 7:31:08 PM (last edit: 2/8/2009 7:31:08 PM)
show user profile  Stianbl
Nice :) But give it a soft spot from the front too. Way too dark as already pointed out.

Also, might wanna do a clay render to see it better =)

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2/8/2009 7:40:35 PM (last edit: 2/8/2009 7:40:35 PM)
show user profile  parkerfamily
make a back-up please, because if you say it's a tiny bit stylized that looks fcking awesome. especially the way the light's on the blue one
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2/8/2009 9:59:15 PM (last edit: 2/8/2009 9:59:31 PM)
show user profile  divertom
cheers guys.
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2/9/2009 2:18:41 AM (last edit: 2/9/2009 2:18:41 AM)
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