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Arg! A Pirate Prop
show user profile  jStins
Hey guys. Most of my work has been in the broadcast industry. Being in Seattle, I'm looking to expand into game art as well. This piece was done to work out a complete texturing pipeline using high poly geometry sculpted in zBrush. I'm pretty happy with it overall, but there's a few things I wan't to add/refine.

The concept is by:http://www.conceptroot.com/Concept-Art/2012/02/11/artist-artyom-vlaskin/

I welcome any C & C even though this is posted in Finished Art.

Cheers!

-Joel


joelstinson.com

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10/27/2012 4:58:27 AM (last edit: 10/27/2012 4:58:27 AM)
show user profile  Mr_Stabby
Nice look overall, could use some harsh AO baked into the textures and a bit more contrasted wood texture

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10/27/2012 7:21:19 AM (last edit: 10/27/2012 7:21:19 AM)
show user profile  Faithcake
I love it, the design is very dynamic., would be interested to see how stabbys suggestion looks, but I like the finish.
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10/27/2012 8:31:32 AM (last edit: 10/27/2012 8:31:32 AM)
show user profile  herfst1
Good work. It's got a tonne of character. Like your painting skills. If I were to criticise... the ropes around the main frame are too low poly and break the illusion, and maybe the metal detail at the base is too high poly?
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10/27/2012 11:05:01 AM (last edit: 10/27/2012 11:05:01 AM)
show user profile  LionDebt
Fucking awesome work mate. Really nice texturing, style and feel to the model. Only crit (if you can call it that) would be to repeat what Herfst said about the rope being a little too low poly. But, as a prop or scenery asset, it's really good.
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10/27/2012 1:16:39 PM (last edit: 10/27/2012 1:16:39 PM)
show user profile  mrgrotey
Yeah cracking job mate. A single chamfer on the rope corners will improve it greatly without much increase in polys.

Grotey

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10/27/2012 6:23:53 PM (last edit: 10/27/2012 6:23:53 PM)
show user profile  advance-software
could save space in your normal & diffuse maps by repeat tiling one rope section. depends on the application as to whether it's worth the effort.
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10/27/2012 6:27:19 PM (last edit: 10/27/2012 6:43:19 PM)
show user profile  jStins
Thanks for the comments fellas.

@Stabby: I was able to get decent AO baked out for the individual pieces, but need to sort out how to get a good AO over the whole asset. I'll revisit the wood grain and try get some high contrast detail that better matches the concept.

@Faithcake: Thanks. I owe a lot to the original concept artist as far as the design goes.

@herfst1: Thanks. Agreed on the ropes. I'll admit that I didn't really work to a specific poly count. It started pretty low, but then I said f*ck it just to make it look good which resulted in some discrepancies in poly density. I should be able to punch up the silhouette/rounding on the ropes fairly easily.

@LionDebt: Thanks a lot. Ditto on the ropes.

@Mrgrotey: Thanks, that means a lot coming from you. Yes. Ropes!

@AS: If I was going to rebuild this asset, more efficient UV packing would be at the top of the list. The rope along the left of the texture is tiled (along the draped ropes). Could have pushed it further for sure.

Cheers guys.




-Joel


joelstinson.com

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10/27/2012 7:06:47 PM (last edit: 10/27/2012 7:06:47 PM)
show user profile  LionDebt
ROPES! :)
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10/27/2012 7:09:08 PM (last edit: 10/27/2012 7:09:08 PM)
show user profile  GirishDJoshi
Looks very nice other than the rope point mentioned above.


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10/29/2012 6:27:50 PM (last edit: 10/29/2012 6:27:50 PM)
show user profile  jStins
I made some revisions based on all of your feedback. I think it's looking a bit better, but the more I look at it, the more I want to change, so I think I leave it alone for now.

I'd like to hear any final C&C. I may make some minor texture tweaks if needed. Otherwise I'll come back to it as I build out a larger scene for the prop.

Cheers guys,

-Joel


joelstinson.com

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11/4/2012 6:35:55 AM (last edit: 11/4/2012 6:38:05 AM)
show user profile  mrgrotey
Big improvement to the ropes! Id say the AO went a little OTT for my liking. Somewhere in between the two if you ask me,.

Grotey

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11/4/2012 7:21:48 AM (last edit: 11/4/2012 7:21:48 AM)
show user profile  mike_renouf
That's really nice work! Hope you can make some headway in the industry with a skill set like that :)




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11/4/2012 8:09:57 AM (last edit: 11/4/2012 8:09:57 AM)
show user profile  digital3ds
Sweet - and inspirational! Just added a new idea to my many pieces of coffee stained papers full of sudden epiphanies! great stuff
- Mike Sawicki




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11/4/2012 9:57:17 AM (last edit: 11/4/2012 9:57:17 AM)
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