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And now for a bit of nudity...
show user profile  herfst1
Again, this is for my portfolio. This time I'm trying to create a realistic human. Please let me know if anything stands out as wrong as. And, yes, I will texture her and model her hair, though I'm not sure whether to use polygons or hair and fir.

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12/5/2011 10:12:13 AM (last edit: 12/5/2011 10:34:23 AM)
show user profile  LionDebt
ooooh shiny.

Also her breasts jut out a bit too unnaturally (ie: silicon implants), kind of hard to crit due to the resolution and angle of your render/screen grabs. Topology looks good though, a couple of nasty poles on her scapula (shoulder blade), and I guess the ankles could use another edge loop for a nicer deform.
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12/5/2011 12:16:26 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 12:16:26 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
@ LionDebt, thank you for those suggestions.

Yes, I wasn't happy with the breasts so far and I agree they look fake. Also, on reflection, her butt looks a bit big. Will work on those things you pointed out and do a better, less shiny and higher resolution render. Also might put up the ref pictures if anyone wants.
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12/5/2011 12:29:56 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 12:29:56 PM)
show user profile  herfst1

Shit, saw a bloody n-gon on her lower back. And that's after I just finished unwrapping the bitch.
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12/5/2011 1:59:28 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 4:32:48 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
Just z-brushed the model. Here are the results:

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12/5/2011 6:01:20 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 6:01:20 PM)
show user profile  Sir_Manfred
Its interesting that thread gets it over 120 views while a thread created at roughly the same time has about 36 views.

If you're gonna put "nudity" in the subject, at least post something hot.
Look at more pr0n for reference. ;)

Visit my Portfolio

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12/5/2011 6:12:47 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 6:13:18 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
You want porn? Here's my reference pictures. Get your box of tissues ready...

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12/5/2011 6:19:23 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 6:31:27 PM)
show user profile  K-tonne
excuse jumbled ramblings :)
establish the rib cage- will help with the chest area- define the illiac crest (the indented bit where the hipbone meets the top of the legs little lower than the bellybutton height) will help with leg to torso
feet- toes vertically too thick and overall too flat- maybe too big too depends on ref
hands possibly too small and thin- hard to tell from these angles- look feminine enough though
head shape is good, although at the back it's missing some features (peak and the bottom of skull and the neck muscles going up to into the back) also i tihnk the forehead shape is a little off- the highest part of the skull is nearer the back of the skull- around the middle looking from the side
i might be tempted to pull the mouth and chin back to under the cheekbone- depends on ref
proportions: legs too long- four heads from head to where the legs meet then 4 from illiac crest to floor
arse crease possibly too male- females are usually more rounded in this area
shoudler blades could do with accentuating a little as does the spine- pops out under the skull (around spine no. 9 or something)
eyes feel too wide- can't tell in the front shot- too much perspective distortion
breasts need to sit on the ribcage

Website and Portfolio

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12/5/2011 6:29:15 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 6:29:15 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
@ K-tonne

Wow, were you a doctor in your previous life? Amazing level of knowledge. I will look into detail ALL the areas you mentioned.

Thank you so much for your input, it is valued beyond belief. If I get the job I'm going for I'll know who to send my Christmas cards to.

[edit] just looked at your gallery and realized that your the dude who sculpted the"ZBrush Vampire type fella." I couldn't get a better source of advice.
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12/5/2011 6:36:06 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 7:13:23 PM)
show user profile  Sir_Manfred
*fap fap fap fap fap fap*

Visit my Portfolio

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12/5/2011 6:37:47 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 6:37:47 PM)
show user profile  killerbee2
herfst, those pictures should be in the photoshop fun thread as next challenge !

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12/5/2011 7:57:00 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 7:57:00 PM)
show user profile  Sir_Manfred

Visit my Portfolio

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12/5/2011 8:14:58 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 8:14:58 PM)
show user profile  Nik Clark

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12/5/2011 8:18:10 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 8:18:10 PM)
show user profile  herfst1
Sir_Manfred, man, you crack me up. Disturbing but brilliant.
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12/5/2011 8:39:50 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 8:39:50 PM)
show user profile  stevey2shoes
Funny how some clothes make you look fat
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12/5/2011 8:57:58 PM (last edit: 12/5/2011 8:57:58 PM)
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