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Abandoned room
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Hi guys and girls.

So I finally have the final render ready.

Big thanks to everyone that's helped out in one way or another.

I'm keen to get any final comments and crits from you guys. I may do 1 final 4k render.

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1/12/2012 2:09:20 PM (last edit: 1/12/2012 2:09:20 PM)
show user profile  LionDebt
I see what you mean with the volumetric lighting...

I love it, personally, but I think it's maybe a smidge too 'hazy'. I preferred it with the single light source (window). But, I guess these things are personal and wouldn't be worth tweaking for a final render :)
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1/12/2012 3:21:01 PM (last edit: 1/12/2012 3:21:01 PM)
show user profile  nemac
It has potential..
- I like the wall and floor textures
- floor boards too wide?
- will agree lighting too hazy/bland, liked the lighting in your wip more, could push the volume light, add dust as mentioned
- composition lacking (more on this later), but no point of interest. Vines stick out and i think "what is that", perhaps add more vines growing around the room on the walls.

Also at the moment the vines remind me of this lol:

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1/12/2012 3:38:21 PM (last edit: 1/12/2012 3:38:21 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Thanks for the comments guys.

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1/13/2012 11:21:17 AM (last edit: 1/13/2012 11:21:17 AM)
show user profile  DannyMax
yeah that dont look to bad mate I did not doing anymore to the file I got from you as I saw you had posted up a render of it. are you going to work on it some more then or what ?

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1/13/2012 11:44:58 AM (last edit: 1/13/2012 11:44:58 AM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
To be honest Danny I think I'm just going to call this done now. Thanks

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1/13/2012 11:58:07 AM (last edit: 1/13/2012 11:58:07 AM)
show user profile  S. Silard
I love it , it's nice , but somehow I feel like it's meaningless , nothing is in the focus .
Something is missing from the center of that room.
Maybe the owner ?

Edit : Anyway , 10 from me .
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1/13/2012 12:51:34 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 12:52:44 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Thanks mate.

playing around with adding a character... what do you rekon?

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1/13/2012 1:10:03 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 1:10:03 PM)
show user profile  xmpltdf
I love the atmosphere you create here. Personally, I prefer without character.
How do you proceed for this cg ? You draw and you make ? Where do you find ideas ?

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1/13/2012 2:36:29 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 2:36:29 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic

I dont know where i get the ideas from. Just come up with them. Once I've decided on the scene i want to create, i just source loads of reference images and work from them pulling different elements from each iamge

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1/13/2012 2:40:31 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 2:40:31 PM)
show user profile  STRAT
the character's almost there. he's floating at the mo and his general shade is too light/bright and flat, to make his sit better or to ancor him better his immediate environment where he's sitting needs contract adjusting too. (ie, a dark shadow under his arse and feet)


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1/13/2012 3:06:26 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 3:07:26 PM)
show user profile  Joey Parker Jr.
This is really nice Rob! The only thing I see that bothers me is for the amount of haze in the room and the intensity of the light hitting the floor I think there would be more of a focused beam of light between the window and the floor.
 photo 2012-sig_small3_zpsbd114b69.png

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1/13/2012 3:27:46 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 3:27:46 PM)
show user profile  S. Silard
Well it's start to get meaning , I'd personally put em to that hole in the center . But who am I , to fuck up your idea and concept ? So if you imagined it as an interior , than better not to listen to me ...
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1/13/2012 6:51:15 PM (last edit: 1/13/2012 6:51:15 PM)
show user profile  rob@dynamic
Thanks for all the comments guys. Much appreciated!!

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1/16/2012 12:55:06 PM (last edit: 1/16/2012 12:55:06 PM)
show user profile  ScotlandDave
Looking good! I think some tweaking is needed here and there to really improve the scene ( for example the hole in the roof and cabling hanging up there looks too artificial, not feeling the window-frame/surround at all, and probably more broad specular reflection picking up on some of the textured wall/floor sections.. ). The character adds almost a purpose to the whole scene but again needs some tweaking. Get some godrays/dust pointing in his general direction :)

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1/16/2012 1:22:07 PM (last edit: 1/16/2012 1:22:24 PM)
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